I found you through Just a Mistake on AOOO, which I loved but I haven't gone and caught up on for a while (I think I discovered you'd updated ffnet more than aooo, but at the time didn't have internet at home - I do now and I really must get on with it! I have a vague memory of leaving Ianto and Jack in a hotel eating oranges...). I think you have some great characters but as with all stories written over long periods of time there are bits which could be tightened/more focussed. Let me know if you decide to do this and need a beta or someone to bounce ideas off - I'd love to read more of this!