http://welsh-scotsman.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] welsh-scotsman.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] galadriel1010 2010-10-25 09:23 pm (UTC)

Aww! Really sweet:D I like the first one and the second one and yeah... they're all so wuvly and sweet and loving:D

Couple of small things; Magdalene has an e on the end and your warning for discussion of domestic violence is right at the bottom and next to the last line of your story; surely that's a little late? I'm just thinking you don't want to get caught out. I would hate for everything to go wrong so you stopped posting such lovely and sweet and beautiful stories (yes, i am that selfish:P)

Also, and this is just me being pedantic but Ianto would probably say arse rather than ass but again, that's just me being picky:D other than that, really lovely story, hope you don't mind the tiny nit picks and hope you keep writing:D

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